primakrazy's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Double Hair Bun Propaganda]

Looks fun.
Looks like one leg is way bigger than the other on each girl though ^^;
I'm guessing they're trying to be foreshortened, but the size way too extreme.

Edit (responding to comment);
I guess one thing you can do is flip the canvas. That usually makes uneven parts easier to spot. For this one, IMO, I would probably make the thighs more even, and lengthen the upper part of the legs that are lifted.

Another thing you could try is to really push and alter the lighting on the other leg. Both legs legs here have the same bright lighting so they appear to be on the same plain, it makes the size discrepancy way more noticeable (and kills whatever foreshortening effect that might be in play here).

Hopefully that helps :)

AidanCore responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) What do you suggest should I do to fix it next time?

[bionic]

Double Thumbs.

That arm looks super cool.
I also really like the lighting on that jumpsuit.

7gobu responds:

thank you so much for your comment!! i appreciate it!

[Miko At Night]

I really should check this show out. Lol at the pixel panties.

One small issue I see here is that it looks like you are shading with black, which always muddies the colors.

Yoshikage-aN00N responds:

rare, because i use other colors to shade

[💀Tron Boner💀]

I'm very tempted to draw some Tron Bonne Fanart.

JungleJops responds:

do it, pls.